Wednesday 24 April 2013

Poetry Analysis: 'Poppies' - Jane Weir

In 'Poppies', Weir is comparing the tranquillity of nature with the carnage of war. The poem shows how the soldiers sacrificed their life to “ransom” the hills of France; thus showing how France’s freedom was paid by the blood of these young men.

Poppies are used as a symbol of both war and sacrifice. The effect of this is to help the reader remember the people who sacrificed their lives for our freedom. Furthermore, the presence of poppies gives the poem multiple meanings and methods of interpretation. Poppies can be seen to symbolise death, eternal sleep or remembrance. All three of these can be applied to the poem. 

The poem expresses the feelings a mother has about the death of her son in a war far away.

The form of the poem appears to be strong and regular. This shows that the narrator is trying to hold in the emotions that have been stirred up by the sight of poppies.

The structure of the poem however shows that there is a lot of emotion beneath the surface: the length of the stanzas and the lines begins to change more strongly.

Time goes backwards and forwards between when he was a child, when he left for war and when she is actually telling the story

The poem also creates several layers of language:
  • It uses literal images (e.g. poppies, blazer) to express strong detailed memories that have not faded with time.
  • Similes and metaphors to express deep emotions, such as "gelled blackthorns", "released a song bird" and "like a treasure chest", "like a wishbone"
  • Finally it uses symbols, particularly the dove and the poppies to show how general meanings shared by us all can also contain deeply personal feelings as well.
Subject matter

The poem is set in the present day but reaches right back to the beginning of the Poppy Day tradition. Armistice Sunday began as a way of marking the end of the First World War in 1918. It was set up so people could remember the hundreds and thousands of ordinary men who had been killed in the First World War. Today, the event is used to remember soldiers of all wars who have died since then.

Form and Structure

The poem appears to have a strong, regular sense of form. There are four clear stanzas, the first and last with six lines, the second with 11 and the third 12.

On closer inspection, however, we can see a great deal of movement within this outwardly regular form. 19 lines out of 35 have breaks in the middle of the lines - marked by commas or more strongly by full-stops. These breaks are called caesuras.

This careful variation in form suggests the inner emotion of a narrator who is trying to remain calm and composed but is breaking with sadness inside.

The biggest movement in the poem, however, is in the narrative structure – how the story is told. The time sequence keeps changing along with her emotions. It goes from "Three days before" (line 1) to "Before you left" (line 3) to "After you'd gone" (line 23) to "later" (line 25) and the present in "this is where it has led me" on line 26.

It ends with her suspended, on the hill, between the present and the past.

Language and Imagery

Sound

Like the form, the sounds of the poem are restrained. Rhyme would seem inappropriately lively.

Language

The colour and texture of the poppies is expressed through powerful language in the first stanza. The detailed description of the blazer is emphasised through alliteration on "bias binding… blazer". We feel the closeness between mother and child the moment she kneels to pin the poppy to the lapel. In words such as "spasms", "disrupting" and "blockade" however, she may be also recalling the violence of his death.

Imagery

This sense of her blocking out the memory of his violent death with a sweeter, purer memory is sustained in the second stanza: "Sellotape bandaged around my hand". This image carries echoes of battlefield injury as well as cleaning the cat hairs off the blazer. The contrast between the death in battle and the domestic happiness (the boy has been cuddling his cat) is powerful.

Metaphor and symbolism

In the third stanza, the language becomes metaphorical and symbolic. The door to the house is the door to the world. The song-bird is a metaphor for the mother setting the child free. This then changes into the dove, the symbol of peace – but here the peace the son has found is only the peace of death.

Attitudes, themes and ideas

The poem is about the nature of grief. The mother is speaking directly to her son but a son who shifts in time. There is:
  • The son leaving home for school on his own for the first time.
  • The son who has just been killed.
  • Beneath the surface the son dying violently in a field hospital in Afghanistan.
It is as if all these different versions of her son fixed exist together inside her. When the poem reaches a moment in the present (line 26) she is vulnerable, without protection. The final lines then go back to the past tense "I traced…".

It is as if the present holds too much pain and her memories can only be expressed if distanced in imagery held safely in the past.

Comparison


Futility -  Although written from a different point of view, Owen's poem has similarities on a number of levels. Its emotional impact comes from linking the violent world of the battlefield with the idyllic life of home. It also draws on rich natural imagery to contrast with the death being described. Finally, its power comes from the rejection of the beautiful poetic images which cannot compensate for the terrible loss of her son.

The Falling Leaves – This poem is similar in tone. Its power comes from the contrast between the calm delivery of the words and the violent subject matter. Another connection is that both Poppies and The Falling Leaves are written by women. They therefore offer important female perspectives on a subject that is dominated, and indeed generally waged, by men.


Examples of language techniques used in 'Poppies': 

Personification:

“the spiteful rattle where the masked machine guns play

Metaphor:

“liquid tune” and “shrapnel’s song"


21 comments:

  1. Really helped me in my revision for end of year exams, thank you!

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  2. This is copied and pasted straight off bbc bitesize

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  3. This is copied and pasted straight off bbc bitesize

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    1. and? whats your point, its still helping students...

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    2. And his point is you've tried to make it look like your own when it really isn't and it's misleading students tk spend more time reading what they already know so it actually isn't helping it's wasting there valuable time

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    3. hes still helping us you dumbass

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    4. i bet you dont know what is the point of this poem Xxx123xxX
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    5. u sound like a beg relax yourself

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  4. Plagiarism is illegal buddy

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  5. does anyone have a copy of the poem?

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  6. does anyone have a copy of the poem?

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